My little song

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http://www.knjiznica-krizevci.hr/matija/foksie-full_of_stars.mp3

If you would like to download this and listen to it and tell me your honest opinion. Big grin

What im interested in is, how to further develop it. I need some suggestions. Also if you like it or hate it or are indiferent, just say so here. Dont worry, even if you say "this is the worst shit i ever heard, you should be killed, brought back to life and killed again" i wont mind. at least ill get some feedback and know what to do with my next project. Happy

Oh, btw its supossed to be Trance, but im not reall sure it fits the ganre. Happy

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I didn't listen to it but it's great (I say that because I like Trance music no matter what) Big grin. Ok i will listen and then post another message.

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nice job

I listen to all types of music, but it's been a while since I listen to trance music. I use to listen to it early in the 90's :-" it wasn't bad , better then what I can could do,

Nice job really

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keep going foksie, dont stop in half of the way Big grin

good you creating it on your own

below link to some amateur song I latelly found

http://orbique.spymac.com/orbique_-_bad_playaz.mp3

I mean make the song harder if you asking for my way of developing it Happy

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ok thanx for the feedback guys. Happy

@Kinetic: Well download and tell me what you think AFTER you listen to it Winking

@Cracker: Thanx. Is there something that bothered you in the song? Since i havent heard it on other sound configurations, i cant guarantee that the bass is mixed in well, or the hats or so on. Anything that really poked your ear?

@Vanguard: Well it was supposed to be a bit more ambientalish than hard, but i think its a nice suggestion. Ill go for a Harder remix, when its done, youll have to evaluate it, ok? Happy Btw, what did you ahve in mind with this "make it harder"? The melody? The kick? The bass? Happy

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OK Foksie, so I listened to it and all I can say that it is a SUPERB song. I agree to the fact that more bass should be in, but that's only if you want to make a brutal remix. For a trance song it has everything there but what can happen if you try a harder remix? What do you say? Big grin BTW: Did you use any programs??

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The entire song is made with FL studio 4, base, no externals... Its a really old song, ive made hundreds since then, but its the one i consider most interesting cause i dreamed the whole thing.

I fell asleep with the bass line going on, and in my dream i heard the rest, so i woke up and started working... after a week of sleeping it was done Big grin

Thanx for the feedback, i just might remix it Big grin

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Najz Foxie. my brother said that its a very good song. From my point of view its a simple song from samples Big grin. Its good taht u made music and im waiting for mero MORE of ur production:)
If u wont i can sand u mine song:D

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actualy there are no samples in this song... i used generators which i coded to produce that kind of sound Happy i dont like samples much Happy

btw give us the link Happy

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Its not bad at all, but Bass needs to be more prominent. Think about when you have finished the track mixing it down, its all in one place acoustically, think space and depth.... but, like it !

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hmmm its time for me to post my songs here.. i also make trance\house\hardhouse.. so tell me what u think of this. if its good i post more. hmmmm now where did i put those songs

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