hey I think it would be cool if you added some more corridors connecting the rooms... especially on the big "lava room", from what I see you have only big doors and teleport or 2... take example from twisty corridor and service passage on dm11... that kind of corridors, it's pretty open map.

btw is lava deep so you can sink into it or it's only on the surface?

thats one lush looking map, if it plays half as good as it looks it'll be a winner.

nice

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nice atm i cant wait for the finished version but take your time, the good maps takes time.

I would consider trying to make the lava shader transparent on the top side in your lava lake and add some stairs the bottom half of the level its unaccessible to the top in default quake. I truly like your texturing its very rich you might want to limit the amount of models you use however but atm its OK your level runs fine and follows the Gothic style well.